Hype reduces reading, sharing — even sales
When “king of usability” Jakob Neilsen cut the fluff from a webpage about Nebraska, the neutral webpage was 27% more useful.
That is, web visitors were 27% more likely to be able to read the neutral version faster, understand it better, remember it longer and enjoy it more.
|Original web copy||Neutral web copy|
|Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized attractions that draw large crowds of people every year, without fail. [Last year], some of the most popular places were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).||[Last year], some of the most-visited places in Nebraska were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).|
Online, hyperbole not only reduces usability. It also….
Make all your webpages easy to read and understand
“Short is too long for mobile,” says king of usability Jakob Nielsen. Indeed, the longer your webpage gets, the less people read.
At Writing For the Web and Mobile our two-day digital-writing master class on Dec. 11-12 in Miami — you’ll learn to make your web copy brisk and clear even on a smartphone.
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